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Minggu, 13 Maret 2011

The example of descriptive text

Giraffe 

One of the most interesting animals in the zoo is the giraffe. This is the giraffe we saw at the zoo. It is male and it is about six meters tall.

The giraffe has big brown eyes. They are protected by very thick lashes. This giraffe has brown spots on the skin. This coloring helps protect the giraffe. It is also has two short horns on its head.
 Like a camel, it can go for a long time without drinking water. One source of water is the leaves which it eats from trees. It is tall, so the giraffe can reach the tender leaves at the top of a tree. 

The giraffe has two methods of self protection. If something frightens an adult giraffe, it can gallop away at about fifty kilometers per hour or stay to fight with its strong legs.



3 komentar:

  1. reviewer: fibrianita esduanafury
    blog owner: evita ardy prabasiwi
    URL: http://evitajournal.blogspot.com/

    strength:
    1. the materials was given clearly
    2. rather complete

    weakness:
    1.too little sentences

    suggestion:
    1. you have to write more sentences.

    overall rate (0-10):
    7,5

    BalasHapus
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